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Front bookcover.

Back bookcover.

Title page


Santa woke up early,
there’s a place he had to go.
It wasn’t to a restaurant
or to a movie show.

It wasn’t to the golf course
where Santa liked to play.
He had a very special place
he had to go today.

Some people do not like it
but that wasn’t his belief.
He’s going to see the Dentist
to take good care of his teeth.

 

Now Santa wasn’t always good
and didn’t brush every day.
He thought he had a cavity
he was embarrassed to display.

So Santa had to go downtown
and be there right on time.
He got into his car and drove,
his appointment was at 9.

Santa got out of his car
and walked in through the door.
He knew exactly where to go,
he’d been there many times before.

When he walked into the waiting room
to find a place to sit,
He had to check out several chairs
to find a chair that fit.


 

Also in the waiting room
were shelves where you could look.
And while you sat there waiting
you could page through a good book.




But Santa didn’t have time to read,
he only had a minute,
Before the Dentist called his name
and was ready to begin it.

.
Santa’s Dentist on this day
is good old Doctor Leee,
Whose been Santa’s favorite Dentist
since the time that he was 3.

Doctor Leee just smiled
as he sat old Santa down.
And then the chair went way back
and turned Santa Claus around.


And happy jolly Santa
then let out with a big laugh,
That made everybody smile
on the Dentist’s office staff.
First Santa had his x-ray
to take pictures of his teeth,
To show inside his mouth on top
and what was underneath.

Then Santa opened up his mouth
as wide as it could be.
And got his teeth examined well
by good old Doctor Leee.

Doctor Leee looked all around
where nasty germs could be.
And though he looked most everywhere
there was nothing he could see.

.

So all he had to do this day
was get his teeth cleaned good,
And make old Santa’s smile shine
as only Santa’s could.

To make old Santa’s teeth today
as bright as they could be.
A special magic spinning brush
was used by Doctor Leee.

When Doctor Leee took off his gloves
and said that he was done,
Santa thanked him and exclaimed
“ Hey that was kind of fun”.

 
Then Santa stepped out of the chair
and went outside to see,
That all the elves were all lined up
for good old Doctor Leee.

Yes even elves and reindeer know
that it is only right,
To brush and floss their teeth each day
to keep them clean and white.

 

To finish at the Dentist
always makes us feel real good,
To know our smiles sparkle
bright and shiny like they should.

With birthday hats and frazzle horns
it was a happy time.
With food and fun they even had
big gum drops they could climb.
.
Now everyone was tired
from this party that was thrown.
And with tummies full of candy
they were ready to go home.